In every book I’ve ever loved is a main character I would follow to hell and back. I’d follow Frodo into the fires of Mount Doom. I’d follow Harry Potter into battle with Voldemort. I’d follow Elizabeth Bennet as she rejects and falls in love with Mr. Darcy. Creating a lovable lead is one of the most important things we can do for our story. It’s part of James Scott Bell’s LOCK formula for writing: a lead readers will want to follow.

I’m thinking about this because I’ve been struggling with my current WIP, putting words on the page but having trouble really digging into this story. Every day when I showed up at the page, a part of me was reluctant. Finally, I did what I should’ve done from the beginning. I stepped back and asked myself why I was so resistant. It didn’t take long for the answer to come to me. I didn’t love my main character. She came off as flaky when I meant her to be fearless; she came off as self-absorbed when I meant her to be open-minded and life-embracing. In short, I needed to do some character work.

So I stopped and re-envisioned her character. I realized she had the potential to be a little like Merida from “Brave,” clever and fearless and charging ahead with confidence, protective of those she loves but ready for adventure.

This story still has a long way to go. I thought it would be finished at 13K, but it’s going to be much longer. I still need to spend some time doing character work, but I now know that I’m on the right track.

Have you ever struggled with a main character? How did you resolve the issue?

ROW80 check-in…


1.) Make measurable progress on one of my WIPs. Wrote 5,132 words in “Stolen by Magic.”

2.) Read three books on the craft/business of writing. Two of three books read. Continued reading “Write. Publish. Repeat.” by Sean Platt and Johnny B. Truant.

Social media goals:

1.) Check in on Twitter or Facebook daily. Goal met.

2.) Blog twice a week. Goal met.

3.) Comment on three to five blogs per day, Monday-Thursday. Goal met.

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